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My last year 9. del

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Hejla.
Kar ne morva verjet da je tu že 9.del. 9.!!!!!!!!!!! No, vglavnem, začnimo.

Moj oče?! Ne, ne to bo pomota. Pa vendar je!! Ko postava stopi na svetlobo ni več nobenega dvoma. A spremenjen je. V njegovih očeh ni sledu topline. V njih odseva hlad. Ne kaže nobenih čustev. Počasi stopa proti nama. Michael opazi, da sem pretresena. Že odpre usta, da bi nekaj rekel, a ga oče z dvigom roke utiša. Michael utihne.Tedaj opazim pištolo, ki jo ima oče zataknjeno za pasom. Preden uspem kar koli reči oče začne govoriti:"Adelaida, kdo je ta fant?" Ne odgovorim. Oče pištolo nameri proti Michaelu. Takoj razumem njegovo kretnjo in začnem govoriti:"Ro je Michael Williams. Moj fant." Oče še vedno s pištolo meri proti Michaelu. Opazim, kako se njegov prst počasi premika proti sprožilcu. Tedaj oče z glavo pomigne proti kotu. Šele tedaj opazim, da tam stoji še ena postava. Takoj imam v mislih, da tam stoji mačeha. A sem se zmotila. Bil je Justin. Sedaj je Michael navrsti da zajame sapo. Vsa pretresena pogledam proti očetu in mu izrečem le eno besedo:"Zakaj?" Oče me pogleda, zajame sapo in začne pripovedovati:"Ta tvoj fant mi ni všeč. Justin pa je zaljubljen vate. Le tako bova dobila kar hočeva." Obraza, ki stoji pred mano več ne prepoznam. Iz njega odseva volja po maščevanju. Naenkrat oče ustreli. Michael se zgrudi na tla. Najraje bi zakričala, a imam čisto suho grlo. Justin vzame nož in me odveže. Skloni se k meni in me poljubi. Hitro se mu izmaknem, a me zadrži. Presenetljivo močan je. Porine me na tla. Onesvestim se. Nevem koliko časa je minilo, odkar sem se drugič v dnevu onesvestila. Niti nevem, ali je že dan, saj klet nima oken. Šele tedaj se zavem, kako vlažno je tukaj. Po telesu me zmrazi. A, ne zaradi mraza, pač pa zaradi dogodkov. Enostavno ne želim pogledati resnici v oči in si priznati, da Michaela več ni.
 

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prvi tip

hejla. jst sm stara 14 in imam tipa ki je moj prvi in mam par vprašanj:
1. pac še nikol nisem imela first kissa niti nisem se še zalizala in me ful zanima kako sploh pride do tega da bova mela fist kiss pa a morm ga jst prva kušnit
2.kako se obnašat z tipom ga lahko kar primem za roko pa objamem al počakam da me on
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