Pisalnicasuicide of her
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my love would open her skin
she'd stand in the mirror, her body to thin
alive she would mourn, but dead she would sing
my love would do all to end this whole thing
a knife in her hand and sorrow in heart
red on her skin where she cut it apart
nothing at all where once has been joy
no happines or love, only urge to destroy
she would walk on the edge and carry a knife
no wish to survive, only ending her life
my love was fighting, drowning in sorrow
without joy or smiles, no seeing tomorrow
she looked in the mirror and decieded she'll starve
into her skin tattooes she would carve
enjoing her pain but wanting to die
at the end too tired even to lie
sirens and places covered in white
doctors wondering if she'll live through the night
her eyes are closed, she looks at peace
but she's falling apart, piece by piece
soon her home is covered in black
and though I know she's not coming back
I scream on the inside for I remember her well
and now she's alone in her personal hell
she'd stand in the mirror, her body to thin
alive she would mourn, but dead she would sing
my love would do all to end this whole thing
a knife in her hand and sorrow in heart
red on her skin where she cut it apart
nothing at all where once has been joy
no happines or love, only urge to destroy
she would walk on the edge and carry a knife
no wish to survive, only ending her life
my love was fighting, drowning in sorrow
without joy or smiles, no seeing tomorrow
she looked in the mirror and decieded she'll starve
into her skin tattooes she would carve
enjoing her pain but wanting to die
at the end too tired even to lie
sirens and places covered in white
doctors wondering if she'll live through the night
her eyes are closed, she looks at peace
but she's falling apart, piece by piece
soon her home is covered in black
and though I know she's not coming back
I scream on the inside for I remember her well
and now she's alone in her personal hell
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Wooooow:heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes: se zavedaš kakšen talent imaš, ta pesem je še bolj neverjetna kot prejšnja!! Ne vem kako ti uspe napisat tako dobro pesem, ki ima odličen ritem in se zelo lepo rima in to še v angleščini!:hushed::scream::smirk:
Če boš kdaj želela postati pesnica, verjamem, da boš v tem poklicu zelo uspešna.:wink::kissing_heart:
Komaj čakam še kakšno tvojo pesem (saj boš napisala še kakšno?)!
Lepo se mej in piši naprej! <3
~ tvoja največja fenica iMusic
Če boš kdaj želela postati pesnica, verjamem, da boš v tem poklicu zelo uspešna.:wink::kissing_heart:
Komaj čakam še kakšno tvojo pesem (saj boš napisala še kakšno?)!
Lepo se mej in piši naprej! <3
~ tvoja največja fenica iMusic
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... Def nisem na robu solz, o čem blebetaš *gre jokat v kot*
Tole je tako dobro, če bi jaz lahko tako pisala pesmi, bi bila blazno ponosna, ker tole je pure fuel za mene in moje solze :) Mogla bi se učit bioligjo in lej kje sem- spet.
Fenomenalno in krasno in awesome all around <3
~Raven
Tole je tako dobro, če bi jaz lahko tako pisala pesmi, bi bila blazno ponosna, ker tole je pure fuel za mene in moje solze :) Mogla bi se učit bioligjo in lej kje sem- spet.
Fenomenalno in krasno in awesome all around <3
~Raven
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Hvala ti! Tvoje pesmi so tut ful dobre, sem prebrala in res upam, da objaviš še kakšno!
Glede biologije - same girl tut js bi se mogla ucit ampak namest tega sm tuki lol
Glede biologije - same girl tut js bi se mogla ucit ampak namest tega sm tuki lol
Itak <3 ! Hvala, delam na njih, hehe
Lmao mi mamo danes test iz angleščine... Mislim saj znam angeško ampak učila se pa tud nism
Lmao mi mamo danes test iz angleščine... Mislim saj znam angeško ampak učila se pa tud nism
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oj js sm 7 razred in konc maja na moj rd gremo u solo u naravi.pac prejsn mesc so med roditelskega starsi in so se tk usi prtozva kam nas to pelejo k je tk 20min stran k bomo sam hodl pac nc druzga pa se sami taki ucitli grejo k nam nc nebi pustil in pac tk od ene moje orjatlce mami je rekla da na njenem mestu nebi sla sam da se nej sama odloci in oac sm misnla da ona tut nebo sla in pol me je mami upr ce grem da se nej sama odlocm in sm rrkla da ne pac da bi drgac sla sam da mi ni nekam za it ce se ucitli ne vejo ka bomo tm delal pa btw nas razred si jabke pa use mece po razredu pa fantje se grozn vedejo in pac ze to mi ni fajn da grem s takim razredom zato sm rekla da ne in zej tk edina ne grem in zej k bo konc pocitnic se bojo ze za sobe menl pa to in zih bo ful ucitlov uprasal kdo ne gre in k bojo rekl za mene me bojo usi "napadl" pa se bojo zejbaval da kao zato kr bi pogresala starse pa tut take ucitlce mam da bojo srpasval zaka ne grem in nevem ka nej odg
