PisalnicaThe voice who wears my name
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Hojla :)
Tuki je ze nova pesem, ki sem jo v resnici napisala ze neki tednov nazaj in je kar custvena, misljena je kot slam poetry (to je u bistvu govorjena poezija ki je zlo iskrena in lahko tut custvena). Upam, da se vas bo pesem dotaknila in vas pustila razmisljati o tem glasu, ki ga imamo v glavi in se borimo z njim. Vesela bom kaksnega mnenja :)
*b*DARK*b*, DARK, dark.
*b*SECRET*b*, SECRET, secret.
Pulling me in.
I'm drowning,
it’s haunting,
I'm running,
I'm losing
the game.
Checkmate.
You hear me?
‘Cause I'm screaming.
The flood of the blood,
the dark river in my veins.
My heart is racing
and i can't take it
*i*no more.*i*
*b*I AM SO MAD!*b*
Soft whisper:
“take it easy"
“i'm here"
“i'll calm you down"
“i got you"
“trust me"
“relax"
It slips around my body like a snake
though this voice it's nothing but fake
HOW DARE YOU MESS WITH MY FEELINGS!
I HATE YOU!
GO AWAY.
JUST GO AWAY.
*i*Please.*i*
But the worst part
when it's all dark
and i fall appart
*b*— that’s me.*b*
When i crawl
and i fall
when i'm whole
*b*— that’s me.*b*
When the evil voice comes by
and it's holding me so tight.
Controls me,
owns me
and i say: *b*"STOP!"*b*
*i*That's still me.*i*
Tuki je ze nova pesem, ki sem jo v resnici napisala ze neki tednov nazaj in je kar custvena, misljena je kot slam poetry (to je u bistvu govorjena poezija ki je zlo iskrena in lahko tut custvena). Upam, da se vas bo pesem dotaknila in vas pustila razmisljati o tem glasu, ki ga imamo v glavi in se borimo z njim. Vesela bom kaksnega mnenja :)
*b*DARK*b*, DARK, dark.
*b*SECRET*b*, SECRET, secret.
Pulling me in.
I'm drowning,
it’s haunting,
I'm running,
I'm losing
the game.
Checkmate.
You hear me?
‘Cause I'm screaming.
The flood of the blood,
the dark river in my veins.
My heart is racing
and i can't take it
*i*no more.*i*
*b*I AM SO MAD!*b*
Soft whisper:
“take it easy"
“i'm here"
“i'll calm you down"
“i got you"
“trust me"
“relax"
It slips around my body like a snake
though this voice it's nothing but fake
HOW DARE YOU MESS WITH MY FEELINGS!
I HATE YOU!
GO AWAY.
JUST GO AWAY.
*i*Please.*i*
But the worst part
when it's all dark
and i fall appart
*b*— that’s me.*b*
When i crawl
and i fall
when i'm whole
*b*— that’s me.*b*
When the evil voice comes by
and it's holding me so tight.
Controls me,
owns me
and i say: *b*"STOP!"*b*
*i*That's still me.*i*
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omajgad tole je ful dobr<33
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kok je ta pesem dobra:smile:. in to me sploh ne preseneča, ker si ti avtorica🩷. pač res ti vedno napišeš tok globoke pesmi, ki ti dajo razmišljat. prosila bi še za kaksno v slovenščini:wink: (zamene ka sm preveč nesposobna:sweat:).
še enkrat bravo:kissing_heart:
še enkrat bravo:kissing_heart:
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hvalaa soncekk<33 za tko lep komentar, mi ful pomeni tvoje mnenje ☺️ bom provala napisat se ksno pesem u slovenscini ce mi bo ratalo ;)
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hvala za vsak odgovor:heart:
hvala za vsak odgovor:heart:
