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What do I feel right now? 4. del

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What do I feel right now?

It is time to stop asking myself
what have *i* I *i* done
and what will happen next.
What have *i* you *i* done to *i* yourself *i*
my question has become
but I won't say it through the text.
Four eyes were meant to talk
and two souls were meant to touch.
So when you tapped on "block,"
you didn't do as much
as I deserve, I guess,
you wanted to hurt me even more,
make me cry into sleep,
even though you have sworn
that you won't take my words too deep.

You did hurt me.
I think you know how deeply into my heart
and how much you have broken it.
The letter was only meant for you to see
that I don't want us to be apart
and I still want us to meet.
Four hands were meant to hold
and two mouths were meant to sing.
Your heart is already sold
and I am waiting for spring
to come and warm the air
because it will somehow bring
something else than despair.

If you think I have given up,
you will very soon see how wrong you are.
But if you think that I have lost hope
you couldn't be more right.
You left me a scar
that hurts every single night
and makes me realize, how far
you have escaped from me
without even the smallest fight
that would my end probably be.




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novo pesem bom napisala takoj, ko se bo kaj najmanjšega zgodilo
 

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:sob::sob::sob: girl:sob::sob:
on block? dejansko?:sob:
and two souls were meant to touch ~lovam:sob::heart_eyes:
btw inspiration iz alley rose?
mas to<33
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hahah mogoc mal insiparationa od conana, to itak
hvala <33
 
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oo, kok dobr<33 obožujem pač :))
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o moj bog. te pesmi so toook dobre. zdele sem prebrala tut prejšne 3 in so lahko rečem samo wow. maš res talent in morem priznt da si 100x bol pogumne od mene ker si ji dejansko povedala. mislm že zato da poveš nekomu da ti js všeč rabš res par ton poguma. in da nebom tuki zdele nakladala bom nardila samo to:
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omg ful ful ful hvala <333 mi res veliko pomeni
hja kar fejst obzalujem da sm ji povedla tako da ne priporočam :D
sm zlo vesela, da se da iz pesmi dejansko razbrat kaj sm misla z njimi povedat ;)
hvala!!
 
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wow. WOW. tele tvoje pesmi so masterpiece, tk ko tvoje zgodbe, je vsaka še bolša od prejšnje :) pa ful sad zveni, upam da si okej <33 drugač pa najbolj mi je všeč to ponavljanje pa kk poetično zveni: "four eyes were meant to talk and two sould were meant to touch" in pol "Four hands were meant to hold and two mouths were meant to sing" I MEAN WOW. da ne govorimo o rimah <3 če boš napisala pesem za pilov natečaj bo zihr zmagala <3
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HVALA DA SI OPAZLA OMG 🥹<3 sm misla da nihce ne bo vidu tega ponavljanja <33
hvala hvala hvalaaaaa :)))

sej mogoc jo bom ane sam srednješolci ne mormo zmagat... :l
 
<3 hahahh nizakajj
aja sam ress... :/ škoda, to kinda ni ferr
 

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