A poem
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Silence
I close my eyes....silence.
The dark space in my mind where the thoughts are supposed to be.silent.empty.
I open my eyes.....silence.
The house, the home thats supposed to be screaming around me, at me even, with happines. silent.empty.
I go outside...silence.
The life that surounds me...silent.
The happy memories died, making space for new, not so happy ones.
Do i speak? No i am silent. At this point, I am silence itself. My mind-silent. My house-silent. My life-silent. No thoughts, no memories.
Just an empty shell with a beating heart struggling to find something worth it.
Am i right to be silent? To not speak at all?
And I just listen to myself disapearing into the empty space called my mind.
Where even the loudest of voices are quieted down.
Silenced.
I close my eyes....silence.
The dark space in my mind where the thoughts are supposed to be.silent.empty.
I open my eyes.....silence.
The house, the home thats supposed to be screaming around me, at me even, with happines. silent.empty.
I go outside...silence.
The life that surounds me...silent.
The happy memories died, making space for new, not so happy ones.
Do i speak? No i am silent. At this point, I am silence itself. My mind-silent. My house-silent. My life-silent. No thoughts, no memories.
Just an empty shell with a beating heart struggling to find something worth it.
Am i right to be silent? To not speak at all?
And I just listen to myself disapearing into the empty space called my mind.
Where even the loudest of voices are quieted down.
Silenced.
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bbg that's so beautifulllll talent massss remember that
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Moj odgovor:
#nevem ka nej
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sola u naravi
oj js sm 7 razred in konc maja na moj rd gremo u solo u naravi.pac prejsn mesc so med roditelskega starsi in so se tk usi prtozva kam nas to pelejo k je tk 20min stran k bomo sam hodl pac nc druzga pa se sami taki ucitli grejo k nam nc nebi pustil in pac tk od ene moje orjatlce mami je rekla da na njenem mestu nebi sla sam da se nej sama odloci in oac sm misnla da ona tut nebo sla in pol me je mami upr ce grem da se nej sama odlocm in sm rrkla da ne pac da bi drgac sla sam da mi ni nekam za it ce se ucitli ne vejo ka bomo tm delal pa btw nas razred si jabke pa use mece po razredu pa fantje se grozn vedejo in pac ze to mi ni fajn da grem s takim razredom zato sm rekla da ne in zej tk edina ne grem in zej k bo konc pocitnic se bojo ze za sobe menl pa to in zih bo ful ucitlov uprasal kdo ne gre in k bojo rekl za mene me bojo usi "napadl" pa se bojo zejbaval da kao zato kr bi pogresala starse pa tut take ucitlce mam da bojo srpasval zaka ne grem in nevem ka nej odg
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super je. všeč mi je da si dodala Trevorjevo ...



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