Pisalnica
Hej hoj, kako smo? No meni še kar gre...
Tukaj je novi del, sepravi moja nova pesem...Hvala če bo kdo dal mnenje oz. kritiko!
#hg:cherry_blossom:
*i*Pesem je posvečena moji simpatiji in ni napisana po resničnih dogodkih.*i*
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*b*TISTO NOČ*b*
Tisto lepo noč na nebu je luna
svojo srebrno svetlobo oddajala.
Nežen veter je zapihal
in utišal je najin val besed.
Ti si se mi tako lepo nasmihal,
povedal si ni celo par toplih besed.
Čas se nama je ustavil,
srce moje si mi ti popravil.
Svoje priložnosti nisi zapravil,
le novo skrb si mi napravil.
Zdaj gledava se,
zreva si iz oči v oči.
Mislim, da si začutil,
da me nič ne muči,
videl si me samo v dobri luči.
Le kako si me našel takrat v tisti veliki gruči?
Tukaj je novi del, sepravi moja nova pesem...Hvala če bo kdo dal mnenje oz. kritiko!
#hg:cherry_blossom:
*i*Pesem je posvečena moji simpatiji in ni napisana po resničnih dogodkih.*i*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*b*TISTO NOČ*b*
Tisto lepo noč na nebu je luna
svojo srebrno svetlobo oddajala.
Nežen veter je zapihal
in utišal je najin val besed.
Ti si se mi tako lepo nasmihal,
povedal si ni celo par toplih besed.
Čas se nama je ustavil,
srce moje si mi ti popravil.
Svoje priložnosti nisi zapravil,
le novo skrb si mi napravil.
Zdaj gledava se,
zreva si iz oči v oči.
Mislim, da si začutil,
da me nič ne muči,
videl si me samo v dobri luči.
Le kako si me našel takrat v tisti veliki gruči?
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Obvestila
12.3.2026
NAPAČNO ZVEZAN MARČNI PIL
Žal se je v tiskarni, kjer se tiska Pil, tokrat malo zapletlo. Če ste med tistimi, ki so dobili »pokvarjen« Pil, pišite na revije@mladinska-knjiga.si ali pokličite na 080 12 05. Poslali vam bomo novega.
Uredništvo Pila
Vprašanje
Si naročen na Pil samo zaradi tekmovanja v Veseli šoli?
Ne tekmujem v Veseli šoli, jo pa preberem.
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Vesela šola me ne zanima.
(93)
Nikako, zanima me celoten Pil in bi bil naročen tudi, če ne bi tekmoval.
(171)
Ja, naročen sem predvsem zaradi tekmovanja v Veseli šoli.
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