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Hej!
Od vas bi rabila pomoč. V ponedeljek imam govorni nastop v angleščini in sem ravnokar sestavila besedilo. Zdaj pa bi rabila vse vas, ki znate dobro angkeščino, namreč moja nagleščina je obup, kakšno je tudi besedilo. Res bi bila presrečna če si si kdo vzel 10 minut in bi mi popravil beselilo(verjetno bi bilo potrebno popraviti čase, slovnične napake in res bi bila vesela, če bi besedilo malo poenostavili, daa nebi bilo toliko teških besed noter). Jaz res res upam da ne zahtevam preveč, ampak rešili me boste če mi popravite.
No tukaj je besedilo:
Hello, I am Xxxx and today I will tell you something about my future.When I grow up I wanna be a atress. I chose this job because I enyoy when I am playing. I can forgets everything else and contrecate just in my role. In this job you can become everybody and everyone and that is it, what do this job that special.
Actors express ideas and portray characters in theater, film, television, and other performing arts media. They interpret a writer’s script to entertain or inform an audience. Depending on the type of role the player plays, a variety of masks, accessories and support are also used. Before the actors start playing, set designers, make-up artists and many others also have a lot of work to do.
Most actors struggle to find steady work, and few achieve recognition as stars. ACTORS PLAY IN THEATER AND IN MOVIES. Most actors have long periods of unemployment between roles and often do other work to be able to survive. Work assignments are usually short, ranging from 1 day to a few months. Some actors in touring companies may be employed for several years.
I wanted to become an actress from a young age, but when I started going to a theater club, my desire became even stronger.
The actor continues to do elementary school, of course. He then goes to high school. The choice of high school is not so important, gymnasiums are recommended, and in Slovenia we also have an Art Gymnasium, a drama and theater department. The actor then receives an appropriate education at the Academy of Theater, Radio, Film and Television. After completing hher studies,she acquires the title of university graduate actor. Actors who do not have a college degree may take acting or film classes to learn their craft. Community colleges, acting conservatories, and private film schools typically offer these classes. Many theater companies also have education programs.
Actor should have Creativity, Memorization skills,Persistence,Physical stamina,Reading skills and Speaking skills and they shouldn’t be shy.
I’m not sure if I’m good for this profession, but I think if you really want something, you’ll make an effort to do it. But I also enjoy being on stage and I think that’s an important point for success.
Hej!
Od vas bi rabila pomoč. V ponedeljek imam govorni nastop v angleščini in sem ravnokar sestavila besedilo. Zdaj pa bi rabila vse vas, ki znate dobro angkeščino, namreč moja nagleščina je obup, kakšno je tudi besedilo. Res bi bila presrečna če si si kdo vzel 10 minut in bi mi popravil beselilo(verjetno bi bilo potrebno popraviti čase, slovnične napake in res bi bila vesela, če bi besedilo malo poenostavili, daa nebi bilo toliko teških besed noter). Jaz res res upam da ne zahtevam preveč, ampak rešili me boste če mi popravite.
No tukaj je besedilo:
Hello, I am Xxxx and today I will tell you something about my future.When I grow up I wanna be a atress. I chose this job because I enyoy when I am playing. I can forgets everything else and contrecate just in my role. In this job you can become everybody and everyone and that is it, what do this job that special.
Actors express ideas and portray characters in theater, film, television, and other performing arts media. They interpret a writer’s script to entertain or inform an audience. Depending on the type of role the player plays, a variety of masks, accessories and support are also used. Before the actors start playing, set designers, make-up artists and many others also have a lot of work to do.
Most actors struggle to find steady work, and few achieve recognition as stars. ACTORS PLAY IN THEATER AND IN MOVIES. Most actors have long periods of unemployment between roles and often do other work to be able to survive. Work assignments are usually short, ranging from 1 day to a few months. Some actors in touring companies may be employed for several years.
I wanted to become an actress from a young age, but when I started going to a theater club, my desire became even stronger.
The actor continues to do elementary school, of course. He then goes to high school. The choice of high school is not so important, gymnasiums are recommended, and in Slovenia we also have an Art Gymnasium, a drama and theater department. The actor then receives an appropriate education at the Academy of Theater, Radio, Film and Television. After completing hher studies,she acquires the title of university graduate actor. Actors who do not have a college degree may take acting or film classes to learn their craft. Community colleges, acting conservatories, and private film schools typically offer these classes. Many theater companies also have education programs.
Actor should have Creativity, Memorization skills,Persistence,Physical stamina,Reading skills and Speaking skills and they shouldn’t be shy.
I’m not sure if I’m good for this profession, but I think if you really want something, you’ll make an effort to do it. But I also enjoy being on stage and I think that’s an important point for success.
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Hoj! Tudi jaz nisem nevem kaj preveč dobra v angleščini, vendar pa sem zasledila nekaj napak(ni nujno da jih upoštevaš):
...tell you something about MY DREAM JOB...
I want to become AN ACTRES. I enjoy when I ACT(to se ves čas dogaja(P.Simple)) and while acting I can forgeT(brez S-ja, ker je I !!!!) about everything else and just focus on my role.
That job makes special (nisem te ravno razumela kaj hočeš s tem povedat!!!!!).....
Za drugo pa nimam časa odgovorit. Menim, da je tvoj govorni nastop zanimiv, a ga je res treba še malo dodelat. Pa vso srečo pri nastopanju!:wink:
...tell you something about MY DREAM JOB...
I want to become AN ACTRES. I enjoy when I ACT(to se ves čas dogaja(P.Simple)) and while acting I can forgeT(brez S-ja, ker je I !!!!) about everything else and just focus on my role.
That job makes special (nisem te ravno razumela kaj hočeš s tem povedat!!!!!).....
Za drugo pa nimam časa odgovorit. Menim, da je tvoj govorni nastop zanimiv, a ga je res treba še malo dodelat. Pa vso srečo pri nastopanju!:wink:
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Najboljši odgovor
Super odgovor
Dober odgovor
Odgovor
Neprimeren odgovor
Nerazumljiv odgovor
Hello, I am Xxxx and today I will tell you something about my future.When I grow up I want to become an actress. I chose this job because I enyoy when I am acting. I can forget everything else and concentrate just on my role. With this job you can become everybody and everyone and that is it, what makes this job so special.
Actors express ideas and portray characters in theater, film, television, and other performing arts media. They interpretate a writer’s script to entertain or inform the audience. Depending on the type of the role that the player plays a variety of masks, accessories and support are also used. Before the actors start playing, set designers, make-up artists and many others also have a lot of work to do.
Most actors struggle to find steady work, and only a few become recognized as stars. ACTORS PLAY IN THEATER AND IN MOVIES. Most actors have long periods of unemployment inbetween roles and often do other work to be able to survive. Work assignments are usually short, ranging from 1 day to a few months. Some actors in touring companies may be employed for several years.
I wanted to become an actress from a young age, but when I started going to a theater club, my desire became even stronger.
The actor continues to do elementary school, of course. Then he or she goes to high school. The choice of high school is not so important, secondary school is recommended, and in Slovenia we also have an Art secondary school, which has a drama and theater department. The actor then receives an appropriate education at the Academy of Theater, Radio, Film and Television. After completing the academy he or she acquires the title of university graduate actor. Actors who do not have a college degree may take acting or film classes to learn their craft. Community colleges, acting conservatories, and private film schools typically offer these classes. Many theater companies also have education programs.
Actor should be creative, persistent, have good memorisation, reading and speaking skills, physical stamina and they should't be too shy.
I’m not sure if I’m good for this profession, but I think if you really want something, you’ll make an effort to do it. But I also enjoy being on stage and I think that’s an important point for success.
You did have quite a lot of mistakes, but perhaps I only notice them because of my knowledge (be careful, maybe I typed something wrong and if you don't understand any words, you are ought look them up). I did my best and I hope you do to in primary school and onward in your future.
Actors express ideas and portray characters in theater, film, television, and other performing arts media. They interpretate a writer’s script to entertain or inform the audience. Depending on the type of the role that the player plays a variety of masks, accessories and support are also used. Before the actors start playing, set designers, make-up artists and many others also have a lot of work to do.
Most actors struggle to find steady work, and only a few become recognized as stars. ACTORS PLAY IN THEATER AND IN MOVIES. Most actors have long periods of unemployment inbetween roles and often do other work to be able to survive. Work assignments are usually short, ranging from 1 day to a few months. Some actors in touring companies may be employed for several years.
I wanted to become an actress from a young age, but when I started going to a theater club, my desire became even stronger.
The actor continues to do elementary school, of course. Then he or she goes to high school. The choice of high school is not so important, secondary school is recommended, and in Slovenia we also have an Art secondary school, which has a drama and theater department. The actor then receives an appropriate education at the Academy of Theater, Radio, Film and Television. After completing the academy he or she acquires the title of university graduate actor. Actors who do not have a college degree may take acting or film classes to learn their craft. Community colleges, acting conservatories, and private film schools typically offer these classes. Many theater companies also have education programs.
Actor should be creative, persistent, have good memorisation, reading and speaking skills, physical stamina and they should't be too shy.
I’m not sure if I’m good for this profession, but I think if you really want something, you’ll make an effort to do it. But I also enjoy being on stage and I think that’s an important point for success.
You did have quite a lot of mistakes, but perhaps I only notice them because of my knowledge (be careful, maybe I typed something wrong and if you don't understand any words, you are ought look them up). I did my best and I hope you do to in primary school and onward in your future.
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Najboljši odgovor
Super odgovor
Dober odgovor
Odgovor
Neprimeren odgovor
Nerazumljiv odgovor
Oh, ENJOY, not enyoy
Maybe switch to survive with TO MAKE A LIVING,
careful with the order at the actor then - THEN THE ACTOR RECEIVES.
That is everything that i found after double checking.
Break a leg!
Maybe switch to survive with TO MAKE A LIVING,
careful with the order at the actor then - THEN THE ACTOR RECEIVES.
That is everything that i found after double checking.
Break a leg!
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Moj odgovor:
potrebuje pomoč ali nasvet v
Svetovalnica
Hrana
Hejj
Pac js mam tezave z hrano (niso hude ampak se vseen).
Pac js sm tko prib. avgusta 2025 ugotovila, da me po doloceni hrani "zvija" in da mam pol krce (nvm al zelodcne al pac u crevesju) in pol grem na wc in sm pol ure na wc-ju in mam drisko. Pac realno tece iz mene.
In pol sm za vedno vec hrane ugotovila da se mi po njej to dogaja, ampak v decembru sm pa kaksno od te hrane tut jedla in pol ni blo nc. Vcasih sm mela drisko in sm bla na wc-ju dolgo, ampak krcev ni blo. In sm ze mislla da je ok, sam pol me je pa vcerej tko zvilo, mela sm hude krce na vsake 15 sekund(priblizno).
In to poteka tko kdr mam krce:
Najprej nekje sm, in pol me kr naenkrat cez cel trebuh useka krc in pol se to dogaja se ene pol ure in pol grem na wc, kjer mi je ful slabo in mam obcutek da bom bruhala- ampak nikol ne, samo pac krci so. In pol sm pol ure na wc(ampak resno pol ure ker sm ucerej pogledala na uro) in pol je ok- mogoce se mal bolj blagi krci ampak pol je use u redu.
Sam fora je, da pol me je strah jest, ker me je strah da se bo po vsaki hrani to zgodilo. In fora je, da se mi je ene parkrat to zgodil na treningu- sam ne morem js bit tm 20min na wc-ju.
In dons nism jedla zajtrka, ker me je blo res strah. Pa u soli se ful nazaj drzim ker me je strah da bom pol v soli mela krce in ne morem sred pouka rect ucitelju da morem nujno na wc in me ni pol ure.
A mi kdo zna pomagat?
Pac js mam tezave z hrano (niso hude ampak se vseen).
Pac js sm tko prib. avgusta 2025 ugotovila, da me po doloceni hrani "zvija" in da mam pol krce (nvm al zelodcne al pac u crevesju) in pol grem na wc in sm pol ure na wc-ju in mam drisko. Pac realno tece iz mene.
In pol sm za vedno vec hrane ugotovila da se mi po njej to dogaja, ampak v decembru sm pa kaksno od te hrane tut jedla in pol ni blo nc. Vcasih sm mela drisko in sm bla na wc-ju dolgo, ampak krcev ni blo. In sm ze mislla da je ok, sam pol me je pa vcerej tko zvilo, mela sm hude krce na vsake 15 sekund(priblizno).
In to poteka tko kdr mam krce:
Najprej nekje sm, in pol me kr naenkrat cez cel trebuh useka krc in pol se to dogaja se ene pol ure in pol grem na wc, kjer mi je ful slabo in mam obcutek da bom bruhala- ampak nikol ne, samo pac krci so. In pol sm pol ure na wc(ampak resno pol ure ker sm ucerej pogledala na uro) in pol je ok- mogoce se mal bolj blagi krci ampak pol je use u redu.
Sam fora je, da pol me je strah jest, ker me je strah da se bo po vsaki hrani to zgodilo. In fora je, da se mi je ene parkrat to zgodil na treningu- sam ne morem js bit tm 20min na wc-ju.
In dons nism jedla zajtrka, ker me je blo res strah. Pa u soli se ful nazaj drzim ker me je strah da bom pol v soli mela krce in ne morem sred pouka rect ucitelju da morem nujno na wc in me ni pol ure.
A mi kdo zna pomagat?
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